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You are writing to enquire about spare parts of your car, you need to highlight what you need, cost and how long the items can be holded

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Hello James, I am writing to enquire about a specific set of car parts, which I am not able to find in my town. I got your shop's reference from one of my friends, who apparently stays nearby your shop. I also did some research on the Internet, and I did find very good feedback. I own a vintage car, bought just about 25 years ago, and is regularly maintained. However, as part of the general check up's, the mechanic has advised changing the air-filter and engine oil, which I cannot find here. You know, owning a historical item has also overheads like maintenance. I am also attaching the photos of the equipment, to ensure that the particular specifications are available to you. If by any chance, some of the items are not available, please do let me know, if you have engagement with some spare part dealers, who can help on. I request you to write me back with the costing and availability status of the requested items. Additionally, please also inform me, by when I need to collect the things. Looking forward to your response. Thank You, Utsav
Hello James,

I am writing to
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.
enquire
about a specific set of car parts, which I am not able to find in my town. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
your shop's reference from one of my friends, who
apparently
stays nearby your shop.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
did
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some
research on the Internet, and I did find
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very
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good
feedback.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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own
a vintage car,
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bought
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just
about 25 years ago, and is
regularly
maintained.
However
, as part of the general
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
up's, the mechanic has advised changing the air-filter and engine oil, which I cannot find here. You know, owning a historical item has
also
overheads like maintenance. I am
also
attaching the photos of the equipment, to ensure that the particular specifications are available to you.

If by any chance,
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some of the
items are not available,
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please
do
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let
me know
If " if" starts an indirect question, you do not need to put a comma before it.
, if
you have engagement with
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some
spare part dealers, who can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
on.

I request you to write me back with the costing and availability status of the requested items.
Additionally
,
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please
also
inform me, by when I need to collect the things.

Looking forward to your response.

Thank You,

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Utsav
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IELTS letter You are writing to enquire about spare parts of your car, you need to highlight what you need, cost and how long the items can be holded

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  American English
8 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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