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You are writing to enquire about spare parts of your car, you need to highlight what you need, cost and how long the items can be holded

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Hello James, I am writing to enquire about a specific set of car parts, which I am not able to find in my town. I got your shop's reference from one of my friends, who apparently stays nearby your shop. I also did some research on the Internet, and I did find very good feedback. I own a vintage car, bought just about 25 years ago, and is regularly maintained. However, as part of the general check up's, the mechanic has advised changing the air-filter and engine oil, which I cannot find here. You know, owning a historical item has also overheads like maintenance. I am also attaching the photos of the equipment, to ensure that the particular specifications are available to you. If by any chance, some of the items are not available, please do let me know, if you have engagement with some spare part dealers, who can help on. I request you to write me back with the costing and availability status of the requested items. Additionally, please also inform me, by when I need to collect the things. Looking forward to your response. Thank You, Utsav

Hello James,

I am writing to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 about a specific set of car parts, which I am not able to find in my town. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 your shop's reference from one of my friends, who apparently
 stays nearby your shop. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
 did This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 research on the Internet, and I did find This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 feedback.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 a vintage car, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 about 25 years ago, and is regularly
 maintained. However
, as part of the general This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 up's, the mechanic has advised changing the air-filter and engine oil, which I cannot find here. You know, owning a historical item has also
 overheads like maintenance. I am also
 attaching the photos of the equipment, to ensure that the particular specifications are available to you.

If by any chance, If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 items are not available, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me knowIf " if" starts an indirect question, you do not need to put a comma before it. if
, if
 you have engagement with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 spare part dealers, who can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 on.

I request you to write me back with the costing and availability status of the requested items. Additionally
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
also
 inform me, by when I need to collect the things.

Looking forward to your response.

Thank You,

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