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A friend is going to your city for holiday and he wants you to help find somewhere to stay. Write a letter to him, giving necessary information he needs. In your letter, you should: • Say what kinds of accommodation your city has • Recommend him one suitable place • Tell him when he should come.

A friend is going to your city for holiday and he wants you to help find somewhere to stay. Write a letter to him, giving necessary information he needs. In your letter, you should: • Say what kinds of accommodation your city has • Recommend him one suitable place • Tell him when he should come. PRw5g
Dear Sir, I am writing to provide you with informarion about somewhere to stay. The first thing I would like to inform you of is kinds of accommodation my city such as: hotels, guest houses, rented rooms, homestay. . The second I would also like to let you know that the place I think you should choose the homestay. Because it suits every pocket, its location in a secure area will make you to feel safe and a quality of room is very good. Abother piece of information the might be useful is you should come here in the summer because it has many activities and the weather is very comfortable. I am at your disposal should you need futher information. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir, I am writing to provide you with
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informarion
about somewhere to stay. The
first
thing I would like to inform you of is kinds of accommodation my city such as: hotels, guest
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
, rented rooms, homestay.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
The second I would
also
like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that the place I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
you should choose the homestay.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
it suits every pocket, its location in a secure area will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
you to feel safe and a quality of room is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
.
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Abother
piece of information the might be useful is you should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
here in the summer
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
activities and the weather is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
comfortable. I am at your disposal should you need
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futher
information. Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter A friend is going to your city for holiday and he wants you to help find somewhere to stay. Write a letter to him, giving necessary information he needs. In your letter, you should: • Say what kinds of accommodation your city has • Recommend him one suitable place • Tell him when he should come.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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