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To: Minnesota Chemical From: The Gustav Conference Center Dear Minnesota Chemical I have received your call related to your bookings. Here are the details: Date of arrival is: Friday July 7th. Date of leaving: Sunday July 9th. We prepared for you one meeting room and two seminar rooms in 2 days. We offer you a Rossini meeting room. The room is big enough for 80 staff to participate. This room has video conferencing facilities, projector and large screen (5m x 4m) and technical support at all times. However, disadvantage of this room is no direct access to the terrace and garden. I think this room is suitable for your requirements. If you are satisfied with my suggestion, please contact me. Thank you for trusting the service of the Gustav Conference Center. Best wishes, Ren Le Thi Phan Ren
To: Minnesota Chemical

From: The Gustav Conference Center

Dear Minnesota Chemical

I have received your call related to your bookings. Here are the
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details
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Date of arrival is:
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Friday
July 7th.

Date of leaving:
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Sunday
July 9th.

We prepared for you one meeting
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room
and two seminar
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rooms
in 2 days. We offer you a Rossini meeting
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room
. The
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room
is
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big
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enough
for 80 staff to participate. This
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has video conferencing facilities, projector and large screen (
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) and technical support at all times.
However
, disadvantage of this
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room
is no direct access to the terrace and garden.

I
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this
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room
is suitable for your requirements.

If you
are satisfied
with my suggestion,
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please
contact me. Thank you for trusting the service of the Gustav Conference Center.

Best wishes,

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IELTS letter you are a receptionist at The Gustav Conference Center. Choose one of company and ogazation

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137 words
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