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letter to council about rubbish collection

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My name is Varghese Thomas, resident of new Heath Colony. I am writing this letter to compliant to you about the rubbish collection in our neighborhood. The main problem is the rubbish collecting van comes once in two weeks. Due to the long interval of the collection of the litter from our lane, it is heavily deposited and overflowing from bins. This rubbish makes our colony messy and smelly. This awful smell is harmful to the resident in this colony. Moreover, it attracts flies and various insects. This waste produces microorganisms and bacteria. In windy time garbage fell all over the kerb and road in our colony. The situation worsened last week when some of the kids in our colony became sick because of this harmful smell. This situation destroyed the beauty of our colony. I concern about the safety and health of my family members and resident of this colony. Hence I believe this problem should solve as early as possible. To address this problem, the rubbish collection regains once a week to avoid the over following. As a responsible environment officer, you must look into it and resolve this issue with no time. Kindly avoid such a situation in the future. I look to seeing a prompt action from you Yours sincerely
My name is
Varghese
Thomas, resident of new Heath
Colony
. I am writing this letter
to compliant to
you about the
rubbish
collection in our neighborhood.

The main problem is the
rubbish
collecting van
comes
once in two weeks. Due to the long interval of the collection of the litter from our lane, it is
heavily
deposited and overflowing from bins. This
rubbish
makes
our
colony
messy and smelly. This awful smell is harmful to the resident in this
colony
.
Moreover
, it attracts flies and various insects. This waste produces microorganisms and bacteria. In windy time garbage fell all over the
kerb
and road in our colony.

The situation worsened last week when
some of the
kids in our
colony
became sick
because of this
harmful smell. This situation
destroyed
the beauty of our
colony
. I concern about the safety and health of my family members and resident of this
colony
.
Hence
I believe this problem should solve as early as possible.

To address this problem, the
rubbish
collection regains once a week to avoid the over following. As a responsible environment officer, you
must
look into it and resolve this issue with no time. Kindly avoid such a situation in the future.

I look to seeing a prompt action from you

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter letter to council about rubbish collection

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
213 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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