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write an letters to your uncle and aunt giving your advice about homeschooling

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Dear aunt and uncle, How are you both? How is Ruby? I hope you three are all doing well, Since I had seen your last letter, to be honest, homeschooling does deliverer a considerable advantages for Ruby. In my point of view, the main advantage of homeschooling is the flexibility in times, for example you could choose Ruby’s study times and the fact you don’t need to rush in the morning because Ruby study schedule is controlling by you or aunt, therefore, personally this sounds like it will bring lots of comforts and less stress in the morning for you three because I totally understand how the whole family have to wake up very early in the morning and to drive Ruby to school everyday on time, especially how you and aunt have to rush everything. However, I want to bring out other point is that Ruby is still young and for her to homeschooling, is mean she will miss out lots of socializing around her peers and more importantly, according to from I knows, it is very important to ensure that children around Ruby age are able to form outer friendship, joining clubs, socializing, having fun, she needs to learn how to form bonds with others, to develop her social skills because without these essential activities, Ruby may suffers from socializing difficulties in the future, especially when she starts going to college or university, and this for sure will make a tremendously impact on her social life. Under this circumstances, I believe it would be the best if Ruby could go to regular school for her to expose the wide range of problems and ideas, or even children comes from different background and ethics, to see the world and be prepare for it although it does require lots of works between you, aunt and Ruby but I sure we can work this out!
Dear
aunt
and uncle,

How are you both? How is Ruby?

I hope you three are all doing well,

Since I had
seen
your last letter, to be honest, homeschooling does deliverer a considerable
advantages
for Ruby.

In my point of view, the main advantage of homeschooling is the flexibility in times,
for example
you could choose Ruby’s study times and the fact you don’t need to rush in the morning
because
Ruby study schedule is controlling by you or
aunt
,
therefore
,
personally
this sounds like it will bring lots of comforts and less
stress
in the morning for you three
because
I
totally
understand how the whole family
have to
wake up
very
early in the morning and to drive Ruby to school everyday on time,
especially
how you and
aunt
have to
rush everything.

However
, I want to bring out other point is that Ruby is
still
young and for her to homeschooling, is mean she will miss out lots of socializing around her peers and more
importantly
, according to from I
knows
, it is
very
important
to ensure that children around Ruby age are able to form outer friendship, joining clubs, socializing, having fun, she needs to learn how to form bonds with others, to develop her social
skills
because
without these essential activities, Ruby may suffers from socializing difficulties in the future,
especially
when she
starts
going to college or university, and this for sure will
make
a
tremendously impact
on her social life.

Under
this
circumstances, I believe it would be the best if Ruby could go to regular school for her to expose the wide range of problems and
ideas
, or even children
comes
from
different
background and ethics, to
see
the world and be
prepare
for it although it does require lots of works between you,
aunt
and Ruby
but
I sure we can work this out!
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314 words
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