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Motivation Letter Russian Scholarship

Motivation Letter Russian Scholarship Ywm65
My name is Mohammad Irvan Aditya from Indonesia, a country who have third biggest rainforest in the world. Rainforest provide huge varies of ecology and ecosystem services, including storing billion tons of carbon, water supply, and a place for more than 50% of terrestrial biodiversity. However, each year we always exhibited by media about logging, forest degradation, and fires event. Again, it’s always cannot captured in early stage and make it more worst. As an impact, many natural disaster has been felt and faced such as hydro-meteorological hazard and drought. I guess, satellite imagery potentially to detect early disturbances in the forest ecosystem. This situation encourage me to learn more about utilizations of remote sensing for ecology and ecosystem which can for early warning systems. It cannot denied, that better education environment will enhance our results. I have checked that University in Russia offering program in Master Geography. This program provide excellent curriculum and flexibilities, who students allow to choose their main interest. One of the major offered by this program about Geo-information and Remote Sensing Ecology, which is pretty similar with my main interest and goals. I believe, I can greatly improve my knowledges and skills by attend in this program. Another reason to study abroad in Russia are to grounding experience of culture divergent and exchange further. I graduated from State University of Malang with major in Geography. Since I was student, I have been part of practicum assistants in my department for remote sensing studies. It was extended until my graduation and adding another courses such as spatial statistic. I working with my lecturer to arrange practicum instructions, and attend in the class to giving student assist and instructions for their project. This experience very helpful to develop my teaching skills and leaderships. I have seen that my main interest in field of remote sensing, which is encourage me to take internship in Remote Sensing Application Centre of Indonesia. Furthermore, I was success studying pasture phenology using remote sensing as a partial requirement for undergraduate degree. I have been partially working as freelancer for spatial data analyst to assist people across disciplines from aquaculture, environmental science, and education. Moreover, I’m part of research team led by Dr. Ike Sari Astuti, which further I was employed by him as research assistant following my graduation. During these time, I working with various task including analysis long-term data, and validating remote sensing based model. Those derive me to able to learn from conventional or traditional technique to more comprehensive method such as spatial data science. This is part of my dedication to adapting to the rapid changes in global research community. Peak of this period, I had opportunity to meet researchers from Australia and Malaysia to help their research project. As a consequent, I have enhanced my critical thinking of how to select appropriate method, calibrate and evaluate model, and synthesis international publications. These all made me qualified to apply to this master’s program. In order to complete my future master degree, I propose to take thesis about analysis forest vegetation type disturbances using satellite remote sensing data. To tackle all of these questions, I designed my research to utilizes land surface phenology derived from satellite imagery combining with machine learning algorithms includes random forest, super vector machine, and k-nearest neighbor gathered with field data for mapping vegetation types. An iterative decomposition analysis, Breaks for Additive Seasonal Trends (BFAST) will applied for detecting forest disturbances (e. g fires, deforestations) from long-term data. As an output, this study will explains deeper about level of risk of vegetation types facing by specific disturbances such as fires. Moreover, an historical dates and locations of forest disturbance events which has been felt will also revealed by these analysis. In additions, through this information kindly helpful for build an early warning systems for anticipate forest degradations. My future goal is to develop myself as lecturer with research skills in field of remote sensing, especially in ecology and environment. With my certain background knowledge, skills and experiences would let me as appropriate candidates for attend in Master of Geography. I believe, this Russian Federal Government Scholarships program is big opportunity for me to escalate my knowledge in this field and also as a bridge to reach my future goals.
My name is Mohammad
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Irvan
Aditya from Indonesia, a country who have third biggest rainforest in the world. Rainforest
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provide
huge varies of
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ecology
and ecosystem services, including storing
Use "a billion" or use a number before 'billion'.
billion
tons of carbon, water supply, and a place for more than 50% of terrestrial biodiversity.
However
, each year we always exhibited by media about logging,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
forest
degradation, and fires
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
. Again, it’s always cannot
The verb 'cannot' requires the base form of the verb: "capture"
captured
in
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early
stage and
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make
it
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more worst
. As an impact,
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many
natural disaster has
been felt
and faced such as hydro-meteorological hazard and drought. I guess, satellite imagery
potentially
to detect
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early
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disturbances
in the
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forest
ecosystem.
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This situation encourage
me to learn more about
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utilizations
of
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remote
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sensing
for
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ecology
and ecosystem which can for
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early
warning systems.

It cannot
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denied
, that better education environment will enhance our results. I have
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checked
that University in Russia offering
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program
in
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Master
Geography. This
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program
provide excellent curriculum and
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flexibilities
, who students
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
to choose their main interest. One of the major offered by this
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program
about Geo-information and
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Remote
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Sensing
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Ecology
, which is pretty similar with my main interest and goals. I believe, I can
greatly
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improve
my
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knowledges
and
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skills
by attend in this
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program
. Another reason to study abroad in Russia are
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to grounding
experience of culture divergent and exchange
further
.

I graduated from State University of
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Malang
with major in Geography. Since I was student, I have been part of practicum assistants in my department for
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remote
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sensing
studies. It
was extended
until my graduation and adding another courses such as spatial statistic.
Did you mean "I'm working", "I am working", or "I was working"?
I working
with my lecturer to arrange practicum instructions, and attend in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
to giving student assist and instructions for their project. This experience
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very
helpful to develop my teaching
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skills
and leaderships. I have
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seen
that my main interest in
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field
of
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remote
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sensing
, which is
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encourage
me to take internship in
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Remote
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Sensing
Application
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Centre
of Indonesia.
Furthermore
, I was success studying pasture phenology using
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remote
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sensing
as a partial requirement for undergraduate degree.

I have been
partially
working as freelancer for spatial
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data
analyst to assist
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
across disciplines from aquaculture, environmental science, and education.
Moreover
, I’m part of
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research
team led by Dr. Ike Sari
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Astuti
, which
further
I
was employed
by him as
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research
assistant following my graduation. During these time,
Did you mean "I'm working", "I am working", or "I was working"?
I working
with various task including
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analysis
long-term
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data
, and validating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
remote
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sensing
based model. Those derive me
Did you mean "to be able"?
to able
to learn from conventional or traditional technique to more comprehensive method such as spatial
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data
science. This is part of my dedication to adapting to the rapid
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in global
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research
community. Peak of this period, I had opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
researchers from Australia and Malaysia to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
their
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research
project. As a consequent, I have enhanced my critical thinking of how to select appropriate method, calibrate and evaluate model, and synthesis international publications. These all made me qualified to apply to this
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master’s
program.

In order to complete my future
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master
degree, I propose to take thesis about
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analysis
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forest
vegetation type
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disturbances
using satellite
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remote
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sensing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
data
. To tackle all of these questions, I designed my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
to utilizes land surface phenology derived from satellite imagery combining with machine learning algorithms includes random
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
forest
, super vector machine, and k-nearest neighbor gathered with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
field
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
data
for mapping vegetation types. An iterative decomposition
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analysis
, Breaks for Additive Seasonal Trends (
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BFAST
) will
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applied
for detecting
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forest
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disturbances
(e. g fires,
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deforestations
) from long-term
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data
. As an output, this study will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "explain"
explains
deeper about level of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
of vegetation types facing by specific
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disturbances
such as fires.
Moreover
, an historical dates and locations of
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forest
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disturbance
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events
which has
been felt
will
also
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revealed
by these
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analysis
. In additions, through this information kindly helpful for build an
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early
warning
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systems
for anticipate
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forest
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degradations
.

My future goal is to develop myself as lecturer with
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research
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skills
in
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field
of
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remote
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sensing
,
especially
in
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ecology
and environment. With my certain background knowledge,
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skills
and experiences would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me as appropriate candidates for attend in
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Master
of Geography. I believe, this Russian Federal
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Government
Scholarships
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program
is
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big
opportunity for me to escalate my knowledge in this
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field
and
also
as a bridge to reach my future goals.
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IELTS letter Motivation Letter Russian Scholarship

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  American English
6 paragraphs
713 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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