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A day in the life with me

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Hi! My name is quynh. I always wake up at 5: 30 o'clock then I wash my face brush my teeth, do morning exercises and prepare my school bag. After having breakfast I go to my motorbike. It take me about 20 minutes from my house to get to my school. In the morning I often attend English and math classes. I usually study at school until 10: 30 a. m. After that I often have lunch with my family. At around 12 noon I go to back to school and attend 5 lesson in the afternoon. I always get home just in time for dinner at 6 o'clock. Next I usually read books and watch TV. At 10 p. m I go to bed. Although it's a day for me I'm contented with what I do.

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quynh
. I always wake up at Wrong phrase; 'o'clock is used only at the full hour. Use simply "5:30" instead.5:30
5: 30 o'clock
 then I wash my face brush my teeth, do morning exercises and prepare my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 bag. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 having breakfast I go to my motorbike. It Did you mean "takes"?takes
take
 me about 20 minutes from my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
. In the morning I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 attend English and math classes. I usually
 study at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 until 10: 30 a. m. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 that I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 have lunch with my family. At around 12 noon I There isn't usually a preposition before "back". Did you mean "go back"?go back
go to back
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 and attend 5 Possible agreement error. The noun 'lesson' seems to be countable, so consider using: "lessons".lessons
lesson
 in the afternoon. I always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 home This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 in time for dinner at 6 o'clock. Next
 I usually
 read books and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 TV. At 10 p. m I go to bed. Although it's a day for me I'm contented with what I do. 