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write an invitation letter to your friend KlM29
Dear OdinaI am writing this letter to personally invite you to share my happiness becouse of getting Masters' Degree. After graduating the university our lifeways divided into different parts. That's way I am going to make a party to rebuild our reletions. Working at school for 5 years, finally, I reached my goal, get the Degree. I'm going to make a big party. Most popular pop musicians and singgers are invited for you and other my dears. The most important thing is food. The menu cinsists of three special meals which are brought from Chine, Kore and France as I wanted. I will be very greatfullif you attend for my occasion. it will be absolutely perfect with you. I'm truely excited about it. I will give some directions. When you come to the centre of the Tashkent, you see The Big Red Sport Hall in front of the Yakkasaroy Restaurant. My house is situated next to the Hall. Olease confirm yopur presence before 8th february, by contacting at 91 1580458. Let me know as soon as possible. Yours sincerlyMuniwa
Dear
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OdinaI
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am
writing this letter to
personally
invite you to share my happiness
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becouse
of getting Masters' Degree.
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After
The verb 'to graduate' requires the preposition 'from': "graduating from".
graduating
the university our
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lifeways
divided into
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different
parts. That's way I am going to
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make
a party to rebuild our
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reletions
. Working at school for 5 years,
finally
, I reached my goal,
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get
the Degree. I'm going to
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make
a
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big
party. Most popular pop musicians and
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singgers
are invited
for you and other my dears. The most
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important
thing is food. The menu
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cinsists
of three special meals which
are brought
from Chine,
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Kore
and France as I wanted. I will be
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very
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greatfullif
you attend for my occasion.
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it
will be
absolutely
perfect with you. I'm
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truely
excited about it. I will give
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some
directions. When you
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come
to the
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centre
of the Tashkent, you
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see
The
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Big
Red Sport Hall in front of the
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Yakkasaroy
Restaurant. My
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house
is situated
next
to the Hall.
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Olease
confirm
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yopur
presence
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before
8th
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february
, by contacting at 91 1580458.
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Let
me know as
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soon
as possible. Yours
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
sincerlyMuniwa
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IELTS letter write an invitation letter to your friend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
178 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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