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Write a formal Letter of application: to apply for the job

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Dear Ms Carroll, It is a pleasure to submit my resume in response to your advertisement seeking for young helper of summer camp for 10-14 year olds. It was advertised in a local newspaper last week. I am a 19-year-old student. Now I am a sophomore in Quy Nhơn University, and English teaching is my ology. I passed the final examination when I am a freshman with good grades. Therefore, I am confident that my English is well. I have been a volunteer helper of youth team for years. My duties are to help the children in the orphanage, which has trained me to be patient with children. I was described by my leader as energetic and sociable. Despite of my lack of organising activities, my healthy is wealthy to participate outdoor activities and sports with children. I would be available to work at any time for as many hours as needed because it is my summer vacation, including some evenings. My enclosed resume provides more details on my skills, qualifications and experience. I look forward to receiving a reply about the position in the future. Your faithfully, Dong Phùng Thị Đông.
Dear Ms Carroll,

It is a pleasure to submit my resume in response to your advertisement seeking for young helper of summer camp for 10-14 year olds. It
was advertised
in a local newspaper last week. I am a 19-year-
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old
student.
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Now
I am a sophomore in
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Quy
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Nhơn
University, and English teaching is my
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ology
. I passed the final examination when I am a freshman with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
grades.
Therefore
, I am confident that my English is well.

I have been a volunteer helper of youth team for years. My duties are to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the children in the orphanage, which has trained me to be patient with children. I was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
described
by my leader as energetic and sociable.
Did you mean "Despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?
Despite of
my lack of
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organising
activities, my healthy is wealthy to participate outdoor activities and sports with children.

I would be available to work at any time for as
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many
hours as needed
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because
it is my summer vacation, including
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
evenings.

My enclosed resume provides more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, qualifications and experience. I look forward to receiving a reply about the position in the future.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
, Dong
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Phùng
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Thị
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Đông
.
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IELTS letter Write a formal Letter of application: to apply for the job

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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