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Write a letter to your professor about your recent in internship and future plans after graduation.In your letter

Write a letter to your professor about your recent in internship and future plans after graduation. In your letter m3gD1
Dear Professor Raj, I am writing this letter to thank you that I got my result in first rank because of you. I learnt a lot in theoretical and practical way about Business management, which is extremely imperative to find a proper placement in job market. So, I really appreciate your efforts and vast knowledge that you provide us. You will be very happy to know that I recently done my internship from Info tech company, which is well known company. I learnt diverse skills such as quick problem solving, team work, customer service and maintaining data. During my internship, I have to arrange meetings, keeping update files, solve customer issues and answering phone calls. Now I feels confident to handle various roles. I have plan to work as an administrative assistant in well reputed company where I can more enhance my skills. I clearly remember those days, when you advised me to choose the business administrative program. So, again I really thankful to advice and guide me. Yours sincerely, Veerpal Kaur
Dear Professor Raj,

I am writing this letter to thank you that I
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my result in
first
rank
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because
of you. I
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learnt
a lot in theoretical and practical way about Business management, which is
extremely
imperative to find a proper placement in job market.
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So
, I
really
appreciate your efforts and vast knowledge that you provide us.

You will be
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very
happy to know that I recently done my internship from Info tech
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company
, which is well known
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company
. I
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learnt
diverse
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skills
such as quick problem solving, team work, customer service and maintaining data. During my internship, I
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have to
arrange meetings, keeping update files, solve customer issues and answering phone calls.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
I
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feels
confident to handle various roles. I have plan to work as an administrative assistant in well reputed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
where I can more enhance my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. I
clearly
remember those days, when you advised me to choose the business administrative program.
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So
, again
Did you mean "I am"?
I
really
thankful to advice and guide me.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Veerpal
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Kaur
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your professor about your recent in internship and future plans after graduation. In your letter

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  American English
6 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
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