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writing my family such as dad, mom, etc

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There are 4 people in my family such as my father, my mom, my brother and me. My father name is Nam. He is 51 years old. He is tall and fat. Nam eye’s brown and black hair. He is a humorous. Because when I was sad stories, he always talk a joke and make me smile. My father help me to forgot all my problem. My mother name is Hien. She is 49 years old. She is thin. Her eyes’s big and black. Mom hair is brown. She is very kind. Because I see my mom always help to poor person by small gif is food, drink or less money. She is cooks delicous. My brother name is Trieu. He is 26 years old. He is tall and fat and a similar my dad. Him face is quite angry, but he is friendly. When he see new milk tea or cake delicous, he always buying to me. Brother always take care of me. I very very love my family.
There are 4
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people
in my family such as my father, my mom, my brother and me.

My father name is Nam. He is 51 years
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old
. He is tall and
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fat
. Nam eye’s brown and black hair. He is
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a humorous
.
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Because
when I was sad stories, he always
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "talks", "talked".
talk
a joke and
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make
me smile. My father
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help
me to forgot all my problem.

My mother name is
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Hien
. She is 49 years
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old
. She is thin. Her
Did you mean "eye’s" or "eyes’"?
eyes’s
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big
and black. Mom hair is brown. She is
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very
kind.
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Because
I
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see
my mom always
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help
to poor person by
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small
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gif
is food, drink or less money. She is cooks
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delicous
.

My brother name is
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Trieu
. He is 26 years
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old
. He is tall and
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fat
and a similar my dad. Him face is quite angry,
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but
he is friendly. When he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "sees", "saw".
see
new milk tea or cake
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delicous
,
Did you mean "he's always buying", "he is always buying", or "he was always buying"?
he always buying
to me. Brother always take care of me.

I
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very
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very
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love
my family.

IELTS letter writing my family such as dad, mom, etc

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
170 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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