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There are 4 people in my family such as my father, my mom, my brother and me. My father name is Nam. He is 51 years old. He is tall and fat. Nam eye’s brown and black hair. He is a humorous. Because when I was sad stories, he always talk a joke and make me smile. My father help me to forgot all my problem. My mother name is Hien. She is 49 years old. She is thin. Her eyes’s big and black. Mom hair is brown. She is very kind. Because I see my mom always help to poor person by small gif is food, drink or less money. She is cooks delicous. My brother name is Trieu. He is 26 years old. He is tall and fat and a similar my dad. Him face is quite angry, but he is friendly. When he see new milk tea or cake delicous, he always buying to me. Brother always take care of me. I very very love my family.
There are 4
people
in my family such as my father, my mom, my brother and me.

My father name is Nam. He is 51 years
old
. He is tall and
fat
. Nam eye’s brown and black hair. He is
a humorous
.
Because
when I was sad stories, he always
talk
a joke and
make
me smile. My father
help
me to forgot all my problem.

My mother name is
Hien
. She is 49 years
old
. She is thin. Her
eyes’s
big
and black. Mom hair is brown. She is
very
kind.
Because
I
see
my mom always
help
to poor person by
small
gif
is food, drink or less money. She is cooks
delicous
.

My brother name is
Trieu
. He is 26 years
old
. He is tall and
fat
and a similar my dad. Him face is quite angry,
but
he is friendly. When he
see
new milk tea or cake
delicous
,
he always buying
to me. Brother always take care of me.

I
very
very
love
my family.
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IELTS letter writing my family such as dad, mom, etc

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
170 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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