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writing my family such as dad, mom, etc

writing my family such as dad, mom, etc G9a9g

There are 4 people in my family such as my father, my mom, my brother and me. My father name is Nam. He is 51 years old. He is tall and fat. Nam eye’s brown and black hair. He is a humorous. Because when I was sad stories, he always talk a joke and make me smile. My father help me to forgot all my problem. My mother name is Hien. She is 49 years old. She is thin. Her eyes’s big and black. Mom hair is brown. She is very kind. Because I see my mom always help to poor person by small gif is food, drink or less money. She is cooks delicous. My brother name is Trieu. He is 26 years old. He is tall and fat and a similar my dad. Him face is quite angry, but he is friendly. When he see new milk tea or cake delicous, he always buying to me. Brother always take care of me. I very very love my family.

There are 4 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in my family such as my father, my mom, my brother and me.

My father name is Nam. He is 51 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. He is tall and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
. Nam eye’s brown and black hair. He is Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
a humorous
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 when I was sad stories, he always The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "talks", "talked".talkstalked
talk
 a joke and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 me smile. My father This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me to forgot all my problem.

My mother name is Possible spelling mistake found.HairHailHenLienMienHie
Hien
. She is 49 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. She is thin. Her Did you mean "eye’s" or "eyes’"?eye’seyes’
eyes’s
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 and black. Mom hair is brown. She is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 kind. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 my mom always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to poor person by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
Possible spelling mistake found.GIFifgiftgigGIGil
gif
 is food, drink or less money. She is cooks Possible spelling mistake found.deliciousDelicious
delicous
.

My brother name is Possible spelling mistake found.TrainTriedTriesTrailTroopTrait
Trieu
. He is 26 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. He is tall and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 and a similar my dad. Him face is quite angry, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he is friendly. When he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "sees", "saw".seessaw
see
 new milk tea or cake Possible spelling mistake found.deliciousDelicious
delicous
, Did you mean "he's always buying", "he is always buying", or "he was always buying"?he's always buyinghe is always buyinghe was always buying
he always buying
 to me. Brother always take care of me.

I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 my family. 