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Dear Katherine I am writing this letter to invite you and your family members on the auspicious occasion of my birthday. As you know that day after tomorrow that is on the 2nd of July 2021 is my birthday. I am organizing a party for all my friends to celebrate the day. The venue for the party is the restaurant "Gavhar" in the centre of Urgench city. The party will begin at 6 p. m with cake cutting followed by games, dance as well as singing and the dinner will start at 8. p. m. At the party dance, singing and classic musics will be performed by famous singers of Khorezm. Our honourable guests, Mr Bunyodbek Saidov, Mr Ogabek Sobirov and Mrs Dilmurod Sultanov will distribute their unique music, singing and dance to our guests who will be in our party. Please confirm your presence on or before the 2nd of July by contacting us at 937597048. I hope you will certainly join the celebration and share our joys. Please do come. I shall eagerly wait your arrival. All the best, Laura.
Dear Katherine

I am writing this letter to invite you and your family members on the auspicious occasion of my birthday. As you know that day after tomorrow
that is
on the 2nd of July 2021 is my birthday. I am organizing a
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party
for all my friends to celebrate the day.

The venue for the
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party
is the restaurant
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Gavhar
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in the
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centre
of
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Urgench
city. The
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party
will
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begin
at 6 p. m with cake cutting followed by games, dance
as well
as singing and the dinner will
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start
at 8. p. m. At the
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party
dance, singing and classic musics will
be performed
by
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famous
singers of
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Khorezm
. Our
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honourable
guests, Mr
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Bunyodbek
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Saidov
, Mr
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Ogabek
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Sobirov
and Mrs
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Dilmurod
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Sultanov
will distribute their unique music, singing and dance to our guests who will be in our party.

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Please
confirm your presence on or
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before
the 2nd of July by contacting us at 937597048. I hope you will
certainly
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join
the celebration and share our joys.
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Please
do
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come
. I shall
eagerly
wait your arrival.

All the best,

Laura.

IELTS letter Write an invitation letter to your colleague

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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