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Write an email to your manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: 1. Apologize. 2. Explain why you don't have time to help out. 3. Suggest a way to solve the problem.

Write an email to your manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: 1. Apologize. 2. Explain why you don't have time to help out. 3. Suggest a way to solve the problem. LbXW6
Dear Manager, I am writing this mail in response of your last mail regarding to do duty of recipients during she went for her lunch on today. I am extremely seeking your apology because I am not free on that time to fulfil your request. As you know very well that I have assigned duty for our upcoming seminar by management. I am leading this event and deadline of all arrangement is just on next Friday. I have only 3 days left to complete all task like finalize schedule, sending invitation to top most company, decide venue and take appointment from keynote speaker on his availability of time on this day. Finally, I have to prepare outline of whole program and submit to our management before Friday. Along with this counting exact number of attendees and tell this number to our dine in committee. As you know this seminar is very critical and higher authority never negligence any single mistake in this case. Dead line is very near and I have to complete my task before this. We reach only a half way towards this. For this time, I cannot handle duty of recipient. By the way, you can contact our HR department for this favour they can defiantly help you to do arrangement for the same. Faithfully yours, Jinny Alberta
Dear Manager,

I am writing this mail in response of your last mail
The phrase 'regarding to' is not correct. Use "regarding" or "regard to".
regarding to
do duty of recipients during she went for her lunch on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
.

I am
extremely
seeking your apology
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I am not free on that time to fulfil your request. As you know
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
well that I have assigned duty for our upcoming seminar by management. I am leading this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
and deadline of all arrangement is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
on
next
Friday. I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
3 days
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
to complete all task like finalize schedule, sending invitation to top most
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, decide venue and take appointment from keynote speaker on his availability of time on this day.
Finally
, I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
prepare outline of whole program and submit to our management
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
Friday. Along with this counting exact number of attendees and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
this number to our dine in committee.

As you know this seminar is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
critical and higher authority never negligence any single mistake
in this case
. Dead line is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
near and I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
complete my task
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
this. We reach
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
a
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
half way
towards this. For this time, I cannot handle duty of recipient.

By the way, you can contact our HR department for this
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
they can
defiantly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you to do arrangement for the same.

Faithfully
yours,

Jinny Alberta
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IELTS letter Write an email to your manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: 1. Apologize. 2. Explain why you don't have time to help out. 3. Suggest a way to solve the problem.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
220 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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