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complain about kitchen equipment

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to complain in the strongest terms about a problem in the referegedator that I bought recently from your store. When I came back home and used the refregedator for 9 hours, I found out that it might be there is a problem with it since the water take so long to chill. Moreover, some of meat became small so I had to buy my dinner from a restaurant. I tried to call the store many time but all in vain. After 3 hours the customer support call me back and I explain my situation. They said they will send an agent but unfortunotely no one has come which is unacceptable. I will be left with no alternative but to (take legal action) unless the refund is received within the next 2 days. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain in the strongest terms about a problem in the
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referegedator
that I
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bought
recently from your store.

When I came back home and
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used
the
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refregedator
for 9 hours, I found out that it might be there is a problem with it since the water take
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so
long to chill.
Moreover
,
Consider using "some meat" or "some of the meat".
some of meat
became
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small
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so
I had to
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buy
my dinner from a restaurant.

I tried to call the store
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many time
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but
all in vain. After 3 hours the customer support call me back and I
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explain
my situation. They said they will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
an agent
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but
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unfortunotely
no one has
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come
which is unacceptable.

I will be
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left
with no alternative
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
to (take legal action) unless the refund
is received
within the
next
2 days.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter complain about kitchen equipment

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
143 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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