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You must write a complain letter about the brolly which you purchased

You must write a complain letter about the brolly which you purchased 1ADnn
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about the brolly which I purchased from you on 20. 02. 2021. Your shop assistant told me that it had a number of unique features. First, she said that it was hand-made by craftsmen of ivory, bear skin and silk. In fact, it was made spurious materialSome other nice expressions of the product by shop assistant and the real condition of purchased goods. It is decorated with silver, made with nano-technological elements, automatically shuts on and off, it is very durable, it can convert to a shower. On the other hand I can not see odd opportunities. I would like you to refund money or change the fake product into the original one that was described nicely by a staff of your shopping centre. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Please, reply in your earliest convenienceKeep regards, Emma Watson
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about the
brolly
which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
from you on 20. 02. 2021. Your shop assistant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that it had a number of unique features.
First
, she said that it was hand-made by craftsmen of ivory, bear skin and silk. In fact, it
was made
spurious
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materialSome
other nice expressions of the product by shop assistant and the real condition of
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purchased
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
. It
is decorated
with silver, made with
Possible spelling mistake found.
nano-technological
elements,
automatically
shuts on and off, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
durable, it can convert to a shower.
On the other hand
I can not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
odd opportunities. I would like you to refund money or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the fake product into the original one that was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
described
nicely
by a staff of your shopping
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
. I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
, reply in your earliest
Possible spelling mistake found.
convenienceKeep
regards, Emma Watson
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IELTS letter You must write a complain letter about the brolly which you purchased

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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