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You are going to work at the university. Write a letter to the head of the university

You are going to work at the university. Write a letter to the head of the university JwNK0
Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the position of teacher to the World Languages University, which was advertised on channel of "Yoshlar" last week. My age is average and I graduated from the University of Termiz, the faculty of English languages in 2001. Since then I have been working in different places. At first, I began my career at the specialised lyceum, then academic lyceum and now at the secondary school in our city. During this years, I obtained certificates of superior degree and International English Language Teaching with the band of 7. 5. Also, I can speak English, Russian and Tajik fluently. I am sociable, organized, patient and I can work under pressure. As my references show, I prepare nine or ten pupils to entering exams of university and IELTS. I have enclosed a copy of my CV and I would be very grateful to attend an interview at any time convenient to you. Yours faithfully Anna Borisovna
Dear Sir,

I am writing to apply for the position of teacher to the World Languages University, which
was advertised
on channel of
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Yoshlar
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last week.

My age is average and I graduated from the University of
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Termiz
, the faculty of English languages in 2001.
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Since
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then I
have been working in
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different
places. At
first
, I began my career at the
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specialised
lyceum, then academic lyceum and
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now
at the secondary school in our city. During
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this years
, I obtained certificates of superior degree and International English Language Teaching with the band of 7. 5.
Also
, I can speak English, Russian and
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Tajik
fluently
.

I am sociable, organized, patient and I can work under pressure. As my references
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show
, I prepare nine or ten pupils to entering exams of university and IELTS.

I have enclosed a copy of my CV and I would be
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very
grateful to attend an interview at any time convenient to you.

Yours
faithfully


Anna
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Borisovna
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IELTS letter You are going to work at the university. Write a letter to the head of the university

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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