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Write an email to this student in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things.

Write an email to this student in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things. qRQjp
Hi Jon, Congratulations for securing 98 per cent in your exams. I was so overwhelmed that the second I got the news I couldn't hold myself ringing you, but unfortunately, it got unanswered. Maybe you got busy celebrating your great moments with your loved ones. Hey, I just got to know from one of your friends that you are looking for some job rather than pursuing further in academics. Considering your financial needs, this seems to be perfect, but trust, there is nothing better that continuing your studies; especially for a teenager like you who never compromised with hard work. Listen, this will broaden your horizon and you would certainly be a great successful human being when you finish your Bachelors in Business Management. You cannot imagine that start working so early would ruin your whole career. At first place, you would not get a respectable job simply with your school grades. Further, economically, the annual package would barely satisfy your current requirements. Needless to say, the job growth associated with least educated employees is very minimum, unlike otherwise, where there would be ample career opportunities with lucrative remuneration. I hope I am able to convince you somehow. Regards, Manu Jain
Hi Jon,

Congratulations
for
securing 98 per cent in your exams. I was
so
overwhelmed that the second I
got
the news I couldn't hold myself ringing you,
but
unfortunately, it
got
unanswered. Maybe you
got
busy celebrating your great moments with your
loved
ones.

Hey, I
just
got
to know from one of your friends that you are looking for
some
job
rather
than pursuing
further
in academics. Considering your financial needs, this seems to be perfect,
but
trust, there is nothing better that continuing your studies;
especially
for a
teenager
like you who never compromised with
hard
work. Listen, this will broaden your horizon and you would
certainly
be a great successful human being when you finish your Bachelors in Business Management.

You cannot imagine that
start
working
so
early would ruin your whole career. At
first
place, you would not
get
a respectable job
simply
with your school grades.
Further
,
economically
, the annual package would
barely
satisfy your
current
requirements. Needless to say, the job growth associated with
least
educated employees is
very
minimum, unlike
otherwise
, where there would be ample career opportunities with lucrative remuneration.

I hope I am able to convince you somehow.

Regards,

Manu
Jain
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IELTS letter Write an email to this student in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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