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Write a letter to your employer to apply for a sudden leave for few hours within the office working hours. -Aware of the date and time do you want this leave? -Explain why do you want it? -How do you intend to make up for the leave time?

Write a letter to your employer to apply for a sudden leave for few hours within the office working hours. -Aware of the date and time do you want this leave? -Explain why do you want it? -How do you intend to make up for the leave time? 6LpBK
Dear Mr. Ghosh, I am writing this epistle for your approval regarding unplanned leave for 2 hours tomorrow due to medical reasons. Since we all are dealing with this pandemic situation and current vaccines shortage issue, prioritizing healthcare is of utmost importance. I have been informed regarding limited vaccine stock of around 200 doses tomorrow in my locality during our office hours from 1 to 3 PM. As you are already aware about the grappling situation across the globe, I would prefer not to miss this vaccination drive as a preventive measure for everyone's safety. I was not aware of this development until I came across local news during lunch break today, due to which I was unable to inform in advance. As this period falls during our working hours, I am willing to work for extended hours either after our regular shift time or on upcoming public holiday of Ganesh Chaturti. Also, to ensure continuity, I am planning to give handover of my pending task to Rohit from my team until my return, as he is well aware about the technical requirements. Hoping you would take this request into consideration. In case my leave is approved, do you have any other technical requirements to be taken care of? Yours Sincerely, Aarav
Dear Mr.
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Ghosh
,

I am writing this epistle for your approval regarding unplanned
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
for 2
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hours
tomorrow due to medical reasons.

Since we all are dealing with this pandemic situation and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "vaccines'" or "vaccine's"?
vaccines
shortage issue, prioritizing healthcare is of utmost importance. I have
been informed
regarding limited vaccine stock of around 200 doses tomorrow in my locality during our office
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hours
from 1 to 3 PM.

As you are already aware about the grappling situation across the globe, I would prefer not to miss this vaccination drive as a preventive measure for everyone's safety. I was not aware of this development until I came across local news during lunch break
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
, due to which I was unable to inform in advance.

As this period falls during our working
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hours
, I am willing to work for extended
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hours
either after our regular shift time or on upcoming public holiday of Ganesh
Possible spelling mistake found.
Chaturti
.
Also
, to ensure continuity, I am planning to give handover of my pending task to Rohit from my team until my return, as he is well aware about the technical requirements.

Hoping you would take this request into consideration. In case my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
is approved
, do you have any other technical requirements to
be taken
care of?

Yours
Sincerely
,

Aarav
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your employer to apply for a sudden leave for few hours within the office working hours. -Aware of the date and time do you want this leave? -Explain why do you want it? -How do you intend to make up for the leave time?

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  American English
8 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
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