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you bought an electronic equipment and within two days it started to go wrong, write a letter to the shopkeeper about your dissatisfaction with the product and service. Ask him to find proper solution for the problem

you bought an electronic equipment and within two days it started to go wrong, write a letter to the shopkeeper about your dissatisfaction with the product and service. Ask him to find proper solution for the problem VlwoO

Dear Mr. Thomas, I regret to inform you that the OPPO A15 phone that I purchased from your store last day is now showing some system errors. Phone was working fine till yesterday noon and after that it got switched off automatically. After I charged the phone, the screen was showing green color. I kept the phone as it is for a few minutes and later on some programming languages are being showed. I have been calling you since yesterday but you were not available. The customer service informed me to raise a complaint through their website. Unfortunately, the site cannot be reached since it is under maintenance. This has forced me into a very difficult situation. I have kept all the warranty papers and the invoice for the mobile phone. Please let me know what I can do about it. I prefer the phone to be replaced since it is software complaint and these problems might arise in the near future. Please do the needful. I look for for your reply and suggestions. Yours faithfully, Akhil

Dear Mr. Thomas,

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phone
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purchased
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now
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some
 system errors. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
Phone
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got
 switched off automatically
.

After I charged the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
, the screen was showing green color. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
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some
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showed
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but
 you were not available. The customer service informed me to raise a complaint through their website. Unfortunately, the site cannot be reached
 since it is under maintenance. This has forced me into a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 difficult situation.

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kept
 all the warranty papers and the invoice for the mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
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let
 me know what I can do about it. I prefer the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 to be replaced
 since it is software complaint and these problems might arise in the near future. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 do the needful.

I look Possible typo: you repeated a wordfor
for for
 your reply and suggestions.

Yours faithfully
,

Akhil