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You are dissatisfied with the new apartment you just rented, write a letter of complaint to the real estate agent.

You are dissatisfied with the new apartment you just rented, write a letter of complaint to the real estate agent. 53aEp
Dear Mr Gregory, Thank you for ensuring that I moved into my apartment on the Proposed date. However, I am writing to inform you that I am experiencing a lot of issues in this apartment and I am really dissatisfied with your services. The first issue is that all the light switches are not functioning. I am presently relying on my rechargeable lamps to study at night and it is really affecting my sights. Another issue is that the plumbing system of this apartment is really bad. Whenever, I use the bathroom the water does not flow out as it should. I have to scoop the water from the bathtub and pour it outside and occupants of other apartments are complaining of the offensive smell of the water. Also, I am unable to flush the toilet. Sir, please I need you to send an electrician and a plumber to come and fix these issues as soon as possible. Thank you in anticipation of a feedback. Yours sincerely Mercy Ikpi
Dear Mr Gregory,

Thank you for ensuring that I
moved
into my
apartment
on the Proposed date.
However
, I am writing to inform you that I am experiencing
a lot of
issues
in this
apartment and
I am
really
dissatisfied with your services.

The
first
issue
is that all the light switches are not functioning. I am
presently
relying on my rechargeable lamps to study at night and it is
really
affecting my sights.

Another
issue
is that the plumbing system of this
apartment
is
really
bad
. Whenever, I
use
the bathroom the water does not flow out as it should. I
have to
scoop the water from the bathtub and pour it outside and occupants of other
apartments
are complaining of the offensive smell of the water.
Also
, I am unable to flush the toilet.

Sir,
please
I need you to
send
an electrician and a plumber to
come
and
fix
these
issues
as
soon
as possible.

Thank you in anticipation of a feedback.

Yours
sincerely


Mercy
Ikpi
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IELTS letter You are dissatisfied with the new apartment you just rented, write a letter of complaint to the real estate agent.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
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