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You are dissatisfied with the new apartment you just rented, write a letter of complaint to the real estate agent.

You are dissatisfied with the new apartment you just rented, write a letter of complaint to the real estate agent. 53aEp

Dear Mr Gregory, Thank you for ensuring that I moved into my apartment on the Proposed date. However, I am writing to inform you that I am experiencing a lot of issues in this apartment and I am really dissatisfied with your services. The first issue is that all the light switches are not functioning. I am presently relying on my rechargeable lamps to study at night and it is really affecting my sights. Another issue is that the plumbing system of this apartment is really bad. Whenever, I use the bathroom the water does not flow out as it should. I have to scoop the water from the bathtub and pour it outside and occupants of other apartments are complaining of the offensive smell of the water. Also, I am unable to flush the toilet. Sir, please I need you to send an electrician and a plumber to come and fix these issues as soon as possible. Thank you in anticipation of a feedback. Yours sincerely Mercy Ikpi

Dear Mr Gregory,

Thank you for ensuring that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 into my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 on the Proposed date. However
, I am writing to inform you that I am experiencing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffairpointquestionargumentcontroversytopic
issues
 in this Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).apartment, and
apartment and
 I am really
 dissatisfied with your services.

The first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffairpointquestionargumentcontroversytopic
issue
 is that all the light switches are not functioning. I am presently
 relying on my rechargeable lamps to study at night and it is really
 affecting my sights.

Another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffairpointquestionargumentcontroversytopic
issue
 is that the plumbing system of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 is really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
. Whenever, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the bathroom the water does not flow out as it should. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 scoop the water from the bathtub and pour it outside and occupants of other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartments
 are complaining of the offensive smell of the water. Also
, I am unable to flush the toilet.

Sir, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 I need you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 an electrician and a plumber to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffairpointquestionargumentcontroversytopic
issues
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Thank you in anticipation of a feedback.

Yours sincerely


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