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Write an email to Jonh about Paul's birtday

Write an email to Jonh about Paul's birtday 1nkxA

Dear John, Glad to get an email! How are you? How 's everything? It's very exciting to hear that Paul's birthday will on Satuday. I know all of us like having party in garden so it's a good idea to have a garden party. Because we'll play some interesting games outside and it's will be cool if it's sunny during the weekend. I want we have a lot of fun in Paul's birthday. So I think we should have babecue because people want to try some grilled food. As I am know that Paul interested in robot therefor we 'll buy for him two robbot for birthday present. Write to me soon! Best wishes Maria

Dear John,

Glad to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 an email! How are you? How 's everything? You use this word too often, consider replacing it withattractivenessallureappealinterest
It's
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very
 exciting to hear that Paul's birthday will on Possible spelling mistake found.Saturday
Satuday
.

I know all of us like having party in garden This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withattractivenessallureappealinterest
it's
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 to have a garden party. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 we'll play This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 interesting games outside and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withattractivenessallureappealinterest
it's
 will be cool if You use this word too often, consider replacing it withattractivenessallureappealinterest
it's
 sunny during the weekend.

I want we have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 fun in Paul's birthday. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 we should have Possible spelling mistake found.barbecuebabe cue
babecue
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 want to try This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 grilled food.

As I am know that Paul interested in robot therefor we 'll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 for him two Possible spelling mistake found.robotrob bot
robbot
 for birthday present. Write to me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
!

Best wishes

Maria