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Write an email to Jonh about Paul's birtday

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Dear John, Glad to get an email! How are you? How 's everything? It's very exciting to hear that Paul's birthday will on Satuday. I know all of us like having party in garden so it's a good idea to have a garden party. Because we'll play some interesting games outside and it's will be cool if it's sunny during the weekend. I want we have a lot of fun in Paul's birthday. So I think we should have babecue because people want to try some grilled food. As I am know that Paul interested in robot therefor we 'll buy for him two robbot for birthday present. Write to me soon! Best wishes Maria
Dear John,

Glad to
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an email! How are you? How 's everything?
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exciting to hear that Paul's birthday will on
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Satuday
.

I know all of us like having party in garden
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a
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good
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to have a garden party.
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we'll play
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interesting games outside and
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sunny during the weekend.

I want we have
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a lot of
fun in Paul's birthday.
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we should have
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babecue
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because
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people
want to try
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grilled food.

As I am know that Paul interested in robot therefor we 'll
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for him two
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robbot
for birthday present. Write to me
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soon
!

Best wishes

Maria

IELTS letter Write an email to Jonh about Paul's birtday

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  American English
7 paragraphs
114 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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