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Write a letter to your manager which include why you want to present your conference topic to your collegues of office and when it could be done?

Write a letter to your manager which include why you want to present your conference topic to your collegues of office and when it could be done? NMw1N

Dear Ali, How are you, hope every thing will be fine at your side. I am writing to inform you that i want to held a meeting with my collegues in office, which i think is really essential for them in near future. Last week i attended a conference in downtown about investment, moreover i wish that i could spread its vital concept to our employees as well. if they'll invest their extra money in a company then they can avail benefits too. I hope you'll consider my request favourably and allow me. Let me explain my timing schedule in detail. As you know on saturday we all are free, that's why i want to put you all on that day, the date would be 26 january at 2. O clock. Its weekend, everyone will be able to attend and listen to me. However our office working days are busy as around the clock due to which it's really intense to get time in between working weekdays. It would be very generous of you i f you allow us as it will give me immensely happiness. I look forward to hearing from you in coming times. Yours friend, Amber

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Yours friend, Amber