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Closure of Local Sports and Leisure Center

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Dear Sir or Madam, This correspondence addresses the closure of the sports and leisure center and related public concerns. My parents spend time at the center nightly to join the cycling classes. Training at the free weight sections is also a favorite hobby of my brother since he is pursuing bodybuilding. Lastly, the dance classes offer enjoyment and relaxation for me. Closure of the business impacts the public as a whole since the means of losing weight is gone. People with medical conditions, such as diabetes, who require exercise will also suffer from this. Finally, the local swim team currently utilizes the place for their weekly training. There will be several negative effects on everyone if the decision is implemented. More people will be obese due to a lack of exercise. Those who deem this place as necessary will also be forced to spend funds elsewhere just to satisfy their requirements. Finally, the local swim team might experience hardships in the upcoming competition as a result of hampered preparations.
Dear Sir or Madam,

This correspondence addresses the closure of the sports and leisure center and related public concerns.

My parents spend time at the center nightly to
join
the cycling classes. Training at the free weight sections is
also
a favorite hobby of my brother since he is pursuing bodybuilding.
Lastly
, the dance classes offer enjoyment and relaxation for me.

Closure of the business impacts the public as a whole since the means of losing weight
is gone
.
People
with medical conditions, such as diabetes, who require exercise will
also
suffer from this.
Finally
, the local swim team
currently
utilizes the place for their weekly training.

There will be several
negative
effects on everyone if the decision
is implemented
. More
people
will be obese due to a lack of exercise. Those who deem this place as necessary will
also
be forced
to spend funds elsewhere
just
to satisfy their requirements.
Finally
, the local swim team might experience hardships in the upcoming competition
as a result
of hampered preparations.
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IELTS letter Closure of Local Sports and Leisure Center

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
169 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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