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You saw an online job vacancy in the travel industry. Write a letter of an application to the tourism office. In the letter : 1. Give your reasons for wanting the job 2. Explain why you think you can do the job 3. Describe any relevant experience you have

You saw an online job vacancy in the travel industry. Write a letter of an application to the tourism office. In the letter: 1. Give your reasons for wanting the job 2. Explain why you think you can do the job 3. Describe any relevant experience you have 86rmx

Dear Sir In response to your recent advertisement. I am applying for the role of Tourist Advisor, I hold a B. A degree in Tourism and Hospitality Management from the University of Cambridge, London of which I graduated with 1st Class Honors. I have decided to forward my CV in application for this position because I have always been an adventurous person right from time. Therefore, I love exploring new places and I am also very comfortable in relating with a large number of people on a daily basis. Furthermore, I believe I am the best candidate for this job because I can achieve success by building and nurturing good relationships with clients from diverse backgrounds. Not only am I efficient, but I can also work under pressure. I am also a very enthusiastic person and believe I can contribute my quota towards the success of your organization if I am considered for this role. In addition to the above, I also have vast working experience in the hospitality industry, as I have been in this industry for the past 10 years. I have worked with world class travel companies such as Moda Tourism Services and Jacada Travels. I believe I can bring in my expertise and join hands with others to achieve a common goal for growth of the company. I am always available to be contacted anytime and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Yemi Bolak

Dear Sir

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