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Dear Sir/Madam, I’m writing this letter to request more information about a scholarship program offered by your College. I was waiting in anticipation to enroll next year for the much-coveted Diploma in English, but due to unfortunate circumstances, I found myself in financial difficulty. I would appreciate it if you could steer me to the right path for scholarships information or if the college will be able to give me financial assistance. My certificate in Secondary education shows above-average grades. I have worked in a voluntary position on weekends teaching English to young foreign kids. I do have the means to pay back if a loan was approved by the college. My employer will vouch for my employment and provide you with proof of my earnings. He could also arrange a monthly deduction from my salary to your bank account. I believe I have what it takes and I trust you would consider my request, by allowing me to continue my study. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully,
Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing this letter to request more information about a scholarship program offered by your College.

I was waiting in anticipation to enroll
next
year for the much-coveted Diploma in English,
but
due to unfortunate circumstances, I found myself in financial difficulty.

I
would appreciate it if you could steer me to the right path for scholarships information or if the college will be able to give me financial assistance.

My certificate in Secondary education
shows
above-average grades. I have worked in a voluntary position on weekends teaching English to young foreign kids. I do have the means to pay back if a loan
was approved
by the college. My employer will vouch for my employment and provide you with proof of my earnings. He could
also
arrange a monthly deduction from my salary to your bank account.

I believe I have what it takes and I trust you would consider my request, by allowing me to continue my study.

Looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
Faithfully
,
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IELTS letter write an email to ask information for scholarship

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
171 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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