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traveling in your country (where to go, what to do, what about weather…)

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Dear John, Hope you and Nancy, both are doing well. Extremely sorry John for without writing in a long-term phase I am so happy when I received your email in this morning. Today is the beautiful day and how excited when I heard you gonna come here next month. It is the beginning of autumn in September and the weather is extremely comfortable with gentle sunshine, some sea breezes and temperature is around twenty-five Celsius. I think that is the most suitable time of the year to visit my country. Do you remember that I used to tell you about how delicious of traditional food and fantastic beach in Vietnam. We can luxuriate in seawater and then have dinner with numerous seafood at right there. I also take you to traditional market and you can see the life of local citizen in my country. I can't tell you all about attractive plans in this email but you have to try it all. I believe that you are excited with my plans, aren't you? Oh, I almost forgot to tell you that I and my parent very pleasure if you come and leave with us throughout your vacation in Vietnam. Take care of yourself until that day. Sincere

Dear John,

Hope you and Nancy, both are doing well. Extremely
 sorry John for without writing in a long-term phase

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so
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Today
 is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 day and how excited when I heard you The word 'gonna' is informal. Consider an alternative.going to
gonna
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 here next
 month.

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 comfortable with gentle sunshine, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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Celsius
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
that is
 the most suitable time of the year to visit my country.

Do you remember that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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tell
 you about how delicious of traditional food and fantastic beach in Vietnam. We can luxuriate in seawater and then have dinner with numerous seafood at right there. I also
 take you to traditional market and you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the life of local citizen in my country. I can't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you all about attractive plans in this email This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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have to
 try it all. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 believe that you are excited
 with my plans, aren't you?

Oh, I almost forgot to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you that I and my parent This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 pleasure if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 with us throughout your vacation in Vietnam.

Take care of yourself until that day.

Sincere