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I thank you very much about your support during the time I have worked at our company. I am writing to request some unpaid leave next month

I thank you very much about your support during the time I have worked at our company. I am writing to request some unpaid leave next month 1knlG
Dear Ms Giang I thank you very much about your support during the time I have worked at our company. I am writing to request some unpaid leave next month My mother in law is 70 years old. She has some problems with her health, she is going to go to Ho Chi Minh City next week. She would like to check her health at Thong Nhat hospital, Ho Chi Minh City. I would like to support her when she goes to hospital so I will be with her during the days at hospital. So I would need to be absent from Monday 19th to Thursday 22nd. My schedule for those days is related to supervising maintenance activities daily and weekly. I suggest Mr Thanh will shoulder those jobs next week. Mr Thanh has worked with me for a long time and he has much experience in solving the problems relate to maintenance jobs. I will also be on call as soon as possible when he need my support any time I hope you accept my request Thanks and best regards Minh Nghia
Dear Ms
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Giang


I thank you
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much about your support during the time I have worked at our
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company
. I am writing to request
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some
unpaid
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leave
next
month

My
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mother in law
is 70 years
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old
. She has
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some
problems with her health, she is going to go to Ho Chi Minh City
next
week. She would like to
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check
her health at Thong
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Nhat
hospital, Ho Chi Minh City. I would like to support her when she goes to hospital
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I will be with her during the days at hospital.

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So
I would need to be absent from Monday 19th to Thursday 22nd. My schedule for those days
is related
to supervising maintenance activities daily and weekly. I suggest Mr Thanh will shoulder those jobs
next
week. Mr Thanh has worked with me for a long
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time and
he has much experience in solving the problems relate to maintenance jobs. I will
also
be on call as
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soon
as possible when he need my support any time

I hope you accept my request

Thanks and best regards

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Minh
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Nghia
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IELTS letter I thank you very much about your support during the time I have worked at our company. I am writing to request some unpaid leave next month

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
182 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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