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Overbilling on car repair

Overbilling on car repair 86xLm
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my sheer disappointment with the services charges I paid after the recent car service. My car Audi Q1 bearing registration number WSD 23654 was serviced at your Hounslow service centre on 12 October 2020. My invoice number is WTERR772. I reported a minor issue with the braking system, a screeching sound, whenever brakes were applied. Your staff promptly fixed the problem and handed over the final bill. I was awestruck seeing a final bill of Rupees Twenty-Five Thousand for a regular service and fixing a minor problem. I always get my car maintained from your service centre due to the high-quality work. According to your rate card, fixed charges for car servicing including any minor fault repair is Rupees Three Thousand only. This incident has shaken my trust and left me feeling cheated. I would like you to investigate this incident and take punitive actions against the staff member found guilty. Further, please refund the excess charges to my credit card immediately. I am not intended to return to your workshop until you take a corrective action. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my sheer disappointment with the
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services
charges I paid after the recent
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car
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service
. My
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car
Audi Q1 bearing registration number WSD 23654
was serviced
at your
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Hounslow
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service
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on 12 October 2020. My invoice number is WTERR772.

I reported a minor issue with the braking system, a screeching sound, whenever brakes
were applied
. Your staff
promptly
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fixed
the problem and handed over the final bill. I was awestruck seeing a final bill of Rupees Twenty-Five Thousand for a regular
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service
and fixing a minor problem.

I always
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get
my
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car
maintained from your
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service
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centre
due to the high-quality work. According to your rate card,
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fixed
charges for
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car
servicing including any minor fault repair is Rupees Three
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Thousand
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only
. This incident has shaken my trust and
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left
me feeling cheated.

I would like you to investigate this incident and take punitive actions against the staff member found guilty.
Further
,
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please
refund the excess charges to my credit card immediately. I am not intended to return to your workshop until you take a corrective action.

Looking forward to hearing from you.
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IELTS letter Overbilling on car repair

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  American English
6 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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