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Beginning of letter, I am introducing about myself. My name is Dao Minh Nghia, I am living at Bien Hoa City. I spent my holiday at Phu Quoc last week. This holiday was provided a travel insurance with covering the cost of anything lost.

Beginning of letter, I am introducing about myself. My name is Dao Minh Nghia, I am living at Bien Hoa City. I spent my holiday at Phu Quoc last week. This holiday was provided a travel insurance with covering the cost of anything lost. VyQVD
Dear Sir/ Madam Beginning of letter, I am introducing about myself. My name is Dao Minh Nghia, I am living at Bien Hoa City. I spent my holiday at Phu Quoc last week. This holiday was provided a travel insurance with covering the cost of anything lost. Today I am writing to you to describe about my bag that was lost at Phu Quoc market. In my bag, there was a valuable watch that I had bought to present my wife in her birthday. It cost about 12 million VND (I will send you a receipt of this watch) In this holiday, I visited Phu Quoc market on Thursday to buy something. While I was visiting the souvenir shop I recognized that I forgot my bag at a coffee shop located at this market. I returned and asked the boss of coffee shop about my bag but he didn’t know exactly where I laid my bag. He also checked the camera system but there was not any information or videos about my bag. Unfortunately, there was a new watch I had already bought at a store. I would like to suggest you review the policies of travel insurance. As I know, my holiday was covered the cost of anything lost by travel insurance and your company provided that service. I will send you all my number insurance and information that relate to this watch. I hope I will receive your feedback as soon as possible Thanks and best regards Minh Nghia
Dear Sir/ Madam

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Dao
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Minh
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Nghia
, I am living at
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Bien
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Hoa
City. I spent my
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at
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Phu
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Quoc
last week. This
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holiday
was provided
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insurance
with covering the cost of anything lost.
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Today
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describe
about my
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bag
that
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at
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Phu
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Quoc
market. In my
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bag
, there was a valuable
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watch
that I had
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bought
to present my wife
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in her birthday
. It cost about 12 million VND (I will
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send
you a receipt of this
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watch
)

In this
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holiday
, I visited
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Phu
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Quoc
market on Thursday to
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buy
something.
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While
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bag
at a coffee shop located at this market. I returned and asked the boss of coffee shop about my
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bag
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but
he didn’t know exactly where I laid my
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bag
. He
also
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checked
the camera system
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but
there was not any information or videos about my
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bag
. Unfortunately, there was a new
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watch
I had already
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bought
at a store.

I would like to suggest you review the policies of travel
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insurance
. As I know, my
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holiday
was covered
the cost of anything lost by travel
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insurance
and your
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company
provided that service. I will
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send
you all my number
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insurance
and information that relate to this
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watch
.

I hope I will receive your feedback as
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soon
as possible

Thanks and best regards

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Nghia
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IELTS letter Beginning of letter, I am introducing about myself. My name is Dao Minh Nghia, I am living at Bien Hoa City. I spent my holiday at Phu Quoc last week. This holiday was provided a travel insurance with covering the cost of anything lost.

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3 paragraphs
250 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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