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There was a civil rights movement in your city. The state government blocked mobile internet connectivity to curb the rumour spreading. You felt that tis move was unreasonable. Lodge a complaint to your chief minister for the same.

There was a civil rights movement in your city. The state government blocked mobile internet connectivity to curb the rumour spreading. You felt that tis move was unreasonable. Lodge a complaint to your chief minister for the same. 1kn7G
Dear Sir, I am Rajandeep kaur, resident of New Amritsar's Green Park Colony, writing this letter to complain against the decision of stopping internet because of the civil rights movement running these days in the city. Well, I am a financial advisor by profession which involves suggesting investment options to customers and processing their applications through a software for which data connectivity is essential, however, as the state's official body has disconnected networks that is why I am facing various issues. First of which is the requests for investing money and paying monthly SIPs are delayed due to which most of them will get cancelled. Secondly, communication with clients has stopped which is why they are not able to get their queries solved on time, because of these reasons I may lose my current as well as potential investors. Moreover, I strongly disagree with this move as it is disturbing the lives of common populous which is why I feel that the authorities, rather than disconnecting internet, should have stopped false news through cyber crime management units. Hope you will understand my situation and will take action as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Rajandeep kaur.
Dear Sir,

I am
Rajandeep
kaur
, resident of New Amritsar's Green Park Colony, writing this letter to complain against the decision of stopping internet
because
of the civil rights movement running these days in the city.

Well, I am a financial advisor by profession which involves suggesting investment options to customers and processing their applications through a software for which data connectivity is essential,
however
, as the state's official body has disconnected networks
that is
why I am facing various issues.
First
of which is the requests for investing money and paying monthly
SIPs
are delayed
due to which most of them will
get
cancelled.
Secondly
, communication with clients has
stopped
which is why they are not able to
get
their queries solved on time,
because
of these reasons I may lose my
current
as well
as potential investors.

Moreover
, I
strongly
disagree with this
move
as it is disturbing the
lives
of common populous which is why I feel that the authorities,
rather
than disconnecting internet, should have
stopped
false news through cyber crime management units.

Hope you will understand my situation and will take action as
soon
as possible.

Yours
faithfully
,
Rajandeep
kaur
.
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IELTS letter There was a civil rights movement in your city. The state government blocked mobile internet connectivity to curb the rumour spreading. You felt that tis move was unreasonable. Lodge a complaint to your chief minister for the same.

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