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write an email to a friend about your trip you have planned for work or pleasured

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Dear Anna, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of your spirits. I am happy to tell you about my plan to visit your place - Sweden. As you know, I have finished my graduation from high school and have free time before entering university. Also, I have not seen you for a long time. So, I decided to visit your place as my travel. I have planned to go to Sweden at the end of this month. I think I will go there by plane with some of my friends. I have searched some hotels that I can stay there. Can you suggest to me some good ones? I extremely expect the cool weather there as well as western food. Besides visiting you, I also want to improve my speaking skill when I stay there. I hope you will welcome me and take me to many interesting places. I look forward to seeing you soon. Sincerely, Trinh

Dear Anna,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of your spirits. I am happy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you about my plan to visit your place Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 Sweden.

As you know, I have finished my graduation from high school and have free time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 entering university. Also
, I have not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 you for a long time. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I decided to visit your place as my travel. I have planned to go to Sweden at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this month. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I will go there by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of my friends. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have searched This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 hotels that I can stay there. Can you suggest to me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 ones? I extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 the cool weather there as well
 as western food. Besides
The comma is probably missing here: "visiting, you".visiting, you
visiting you
, I also
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my speaking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 when I stay there. I hope you will welcome me and take me to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 interesting places.

I look forward to seeing you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Sincerely
,

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Trinh