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An answer letter to Nick hullas jonga tegdin

An answer letter to Nick hullas jonga tegdin MrkYo

Dear Nick I'm so glad that you have started a new project. I think you're doing your best to do this project well and you will impress your teacher and I help you with this work. If you'd like to paint me I invite you to my home coming Sunday because I'll be free on this day. There is a big beautiful garden behind my home. In my opinion, this place can be fine for you. As I know, there are many kind of fruit trees in it such as apple, cherry, apricot, pear, peach an so on. The green grass on the ground of the center of the garden is best place to work. Moreover, there is a lovely stream that flows through our garden. Also, I’d like you to include a special object in the picture – something important for me. For instance, I have a historic jug at home which I was given in France two years ago. It reminds me my friend Lucy who I got acquainted with there. It’ll be better if you take my request into consideration. Look forward to hearing from you. Nuriddin

Dear Nick

I'm This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 glad that you have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 a new project. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you're doing your best It appears that a hyphen is missing.to-do
to do
 this project well and you will impress your teacher and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you with this work. If you'd like to paint me I invite you to my home coming Sunday This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I'll be free on this day.

There is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 garden behind my home. In my opinion, this place can be fine for you. As I know, there are Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: "many kinds".many kinds
many kind
 of fruit trees in it such as apple, cherry, apricot, pear, peach Did you mean "and" or "any"?andany
an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on. The green grass on the ground of the center of the garden A determiner is probably missing here: "is the best".is the best
is best
 place to work. Moreover
, there is a lovely stream that flows through our garden.

Also
, I’d like you to include a special object in the picture Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
 something This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for me. For instance
, I have a historic jug at home which I was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 in France two years ago. It reminds me my friend Lucy who I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 acquainted with there. It’ll be better if you take my request into consideration.

Look forward to hearing from you.

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Nuriddin