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Letter to a friend requesting her to return the briefcase

Letter to a friend requesting her to return the briefcase 2RG2J

Dear Penny, I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing this letter to thank you for a lovely stay at your place in Australia last month, when I visited there for my office’s conference. I must say, you and your husband are amazing hosts and I had a wonderful time with you both. Do you remember that when I stayed at your place, I was carrying a small black color briefcase with the brand name ‘Samsonite’ embedded on the front side of it? I believe that I left it in your guest room’s wardrobe. Would you please send the briefcase to my India’s address mentioned on the back of this letter as it has some important office documents, which I need to submit to my manager by next week. There is a good courier service provided by DTDC Couriers Limited in your area and they will pick-up the briefcase from your door-step. Thank you again for your time and stay. I hope to see you soon. Warm Regards, Sam

Dear Penny,

I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing this letter to thank you for a lovely stay at your place in Australia last month, when I visited there for my office’s conference.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 say, you and your husband are amazing hosts and I had a wonderful time with you both. Do you remember that when I stayed at your place, I was carrying a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 black color briefcase with the brand name ‘Samsonite’ embedded on the front side of it? I believe that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 it in your guest room’s wardrobe.

Would you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 the briefcase to my India’s address mentioned on the back of this letter as it has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 office documents, which I need to submit to my manager by next
 week. There is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 courier service provided by Possible spelling mistake found.DTCDDCTDCD TDCDT DC
DTDC
 Couriers Limited in your Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).area, and
area and
 they will pick-up the briefcase from your door-step.

Thank you again for your time and stay. I hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Warm Regards,

Sam