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Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language • ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly • propose that you meet your friend to talk about it

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language • ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly • propose that you meet your friend to talk about it gWod3
Dear Vivan, How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am excited to share with you some news, I got a job offer in Netherlands and I will be moving there in a month’s time. One of the primary requirement is to speak Dutch. As you are aware, I am in the hospitality industry and hence I need to have understanding of various languages and cultures. I have been enrolled in multiple online classes to have a basic understanding of the language. I also have a few software in my Laptop. However I do admit, that I am struggling to have a good tone in my language. Since you are a fluent Dutch speaker, I will love your help. Please do share some techniques on how do I get more fluent and have a vast range of vocabulary. It’s been a while we haven’t met. Why don’t you come over to my place over the weekend? Let’s have some fun and I can get your guidance before starting my next work. Give me a call on what you think. With Love, Utsav
Dear
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Vivan
,

How are you? I hope you are doing well. I
am excited
to share with you
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some
news, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a job offer
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in Netherlands
and I will be moving there in a month’s time. One of the primary requirement is to speak Dutch. As you are aware, I am in the hospitality industry and
hence
I need to have understanding of various languages and cultures. I have
been enrolled
in multiple online classes to have a basic understanding of the language. I
also
have a
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few software
in my Laptop.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
I do admit, that I am struggling to have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
tone in my language.

Since you are a fluent Dutch speaker, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
do share
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
techniques on how do I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more fluent and have a vast range of vocabulary. It’s been a while we haven’t met. Why don’t you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
over to my place over the weekend?
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
’s have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
fun and I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
your guidance
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
starting my
next
work. Give me a call on what you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
.

With
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
,

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Utsav
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language • ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly • propose that you meet your friend to talk about it

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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