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Write a letter requesting more information about the language courses

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Hanoi, October 31st, 2021 Dear Mrs. Khanh, I saw your advertisement about the language courses on your website. I am interested in learning English, but my English is not good. I am writing to enquire about your center’s English classes. I lost a lot of roots in grammar and vocabulary. But my strong point is the pronunciation is quite accurate with the words I have learned. I want to join a grammar and vocabulary review class to replenish the knowledge I lost. I hope the class has a maximum of 10 students because I want the teacher to be able to teach each student carefully, and hope to have some sessions taught by native speakers to improve listening and speaking skills. I would also like to have more information about the starting date, length of the course, the expertise of the instructors, fee, and course certificate. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours truly, Khanh Linh

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because
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Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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 like to have more information about the starting date, length of the course, the expertise of the instructors, fee, and course certificate.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours truly
,

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