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the fucking dates helping the poor people, do you believe it. NlKag
Dear Sir or Madam, I have seen your job offer in the national newspaper working as a tour guide for the tourists guiding them through the historic places and other places too. I think I want to take your offer, as it has been my dream since I was a little child playing in the backyard in one of old places in my town. I have a good knowledge about how to help others relax through visiting many different place. Even me, I experienced the excitement of relaxing in tourist places, and I want to deliver this feeling of relaxation to the other people escpecially in this fast-paced environment that stress on every one. I think I could take the job, and do it perfectly, as I am a flexible person. In my college years, I made too many campaigns and organizations for students that make my colleagues benefit form it such as: visiting historic places, amusant parks and more. So, I see my self capable to get accepted in this position, I am looking forward to hearing back from you soon. Yours sincerely, Zeyad.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I have
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your job offer in the national newspaper working as a tour guide for the tourists guiding them through the historic
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and other
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too.

I
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I want to take your offer, as it has been my dream since I was a
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child playing in the backyard in one of
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in my town.

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have a
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knowledge about how to
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others relax through visiting
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many
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different
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. Even me, I experienced the excitement of relaxing in tourist
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places
, and I want to deliver this feeling of relaxation to the other
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people
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escpecially
in this
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fast
-paced environment that
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stress
on every one.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
I could take the job, and do it
perfectly
, as I am a flexible person. In my college years, I made too
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
campaigns and organizations for students that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
my colleagues benefit form it such as: visiting historic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
,
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amusant
parks and more.

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, I
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see
my self capable to
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get
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accepted
in this position, I am looking forward to hearing back from you
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Zeyad
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IELTS letter the fucking dates helping the poor people, do you believe it.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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