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Give advice to your friend about finding a place to live

Give advice to your friend about finding a place to live RwrM8
Dear Pihu, So good to hear from you since long. I received your letter yesterday about accomodation. Well, i will share my experience through this letter which may be beneficial for you. I had done my academics in The British College from 2015 to 2017. That was the most memorable time, indeed. There is an apartment near my college called Sahara. I stayes there for 3 years. The rooms were very cozy. The owner never makes me feel like stranger to her as she is very caring. Apparently, i choose this place due to plethora of reasons. Initially, that place seems to be nearer to my college. As i mentioned earlier, landlord was remarkable. Furthermore, the rooms and food is so brilliant. However, if it does not suits your requirements, please go for newspaper advertisements for the same. Infact you can ask your peers for suggestions. Be careful, do not sign an agreement till you are fully satisfied. Literally you should not adviced to give any kind of advance till final settlement. I wish my suggestions help you in finding a place to live. Thanking youYours trulyHappy
Dear
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Pihu
,
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good
to hear from you since long. I received your letter yesterday about
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accomodation
. Well,
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i
will share my experience through this letter which may be beneficial for you. I had done my academics in The British College from 2015 to 2017. That was the most memorable time,
indeed
. There is an apartment near my college called Sahara. I
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stayes
there for 3 years. The rooms were
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very
cozy. The owner never
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makes
me feel like stranger to her as she is
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very
caring.
Apparently
,
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i
choose this place due to plethora of reasons.
Initially
, that place seems to be nearer to my college. As
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i
mentioned earlier, landlord was remarkable.
Furthermore
, the rooms and food is
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so
brilliant.
However
, if it does not
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suits
your requirements,
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please
go for newspaper advertisements for the same.
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Infact
you can ask your peers for suggestions. Be careful, do not
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sign
an agreement till you are
fully
satisfied.
Literally
you should not
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adviced
to give any kind of advance till final settlement. I wish my suggestions
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help
you in finding a place to
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live
. Thanking
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youYours
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trulyHappy
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IELTS letter Give advice to your friend about finding a place to live

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
186 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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