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Write an email (120-150 words) to your friend to give advice on how to learn English well.

Write an email (120-150 words) to your friend to give advice on how to learn English well. 2x0AX
Dear Nhat, Last letter you asked me how I learn English. So, today I would like to tell you how to learn English well. First you have to learn all the grammar and how to use them, Grammar is very important, and it will help you enhence writing skill. Second you have to learn vocabularies, the more learn the new words the more keep you conversation well. The other way, you should practice with you friends by speaking with them all English that you are learning or you to talk to foreigners come to visit to build up your speaking skill without afraid. And the important way that you should reading English everyday to help you learn more vocabularies. I hope all the advices that I just tell you above that will help to improve your English field and will be successful in the future. Your friend, Loan
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learn
all the grammar and how to
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learn
vocabularies, the more
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learn
the new words the more
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well. The other way, you should practice with you friends by speaking with them all English that you are learning or you to talk to foreigners
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to visit to build up your speaking
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without afraid. And the
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way that you should
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learn
more vocabularies. I hope all the advices that I
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you above that will
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your English field and will be successful in the future.

Your friend,

Loan

IELTS letter Write an email (120-150 words) to your friend to give advice on how to learn English well.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
147 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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