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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to apply for admission to study to the English Teachers Training course which I saw a number of information online about it. this course is vital to raise their knowledge more and more. The training course is organized per year online for teachers to redevelop more their skills and techniques between two and three weeks by the most foreigner trainers. It gives us to be aware of knowing new modern education. The course trainers teached and gives important information how to improve their language skills. Every training consists of four skills; Reading, Listening, Writing and Speaking. Teachers do exercises in this skills with numerous tests online and check. Also they can debate eachother in the special groups about their mistakes. I hope this training course help me to improve my English and to get Level B2. I try to fallow every training.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to apply for admission to study to the English Teachers
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Training
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course
which I
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saw
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a number of information
online about it. this
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course
is vital to raise their knowledge more and more. The
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training
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course
is organized
per year online for teachers to redevelop more their
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skills
and techniques between two and three weeks by the
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most foreigner
trainers. It gives us to be aware of knowing new modern education. The
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course
trainers
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teached
and gives
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important
information how to
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improve
their language
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skills
. Every
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training
consists of four
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skills
; Reading, Listening, Writing and Speaking. Teachers do exercises in
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this
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skills
with numerous
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tests
online and
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check
.
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Also
they can debate
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eachother
in the special groups about their mistakes. I hope this
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training
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course
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help
me to
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improve
my English and to
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get
Level B2. I try to fallow every
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training
.
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IELTS letter Write an application letter to your company manager

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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