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You have seen an advertisement in an autralian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. write a letter to the parents explaining why you would like the job, and be suitable person to employ.

You have seen an advertisement in an autralian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. write a letter to the parents explaining why you would like the job, and be suitable person to employ. 85M55
Dear Sir or Madam, I am applying for the post of Nanny in reference to your advertisement in this months' issue of the Australia Cosmopolitan magazine. Your advertisement mentioned a requirement to care for a six-year-old while living with the family for six months, which I would be most happy to fulfil. I have always felt that looking after young ones is not only rewarding but also pleasing. Caring for a little one while also getting paid sounds like a dream come true. My bachelors' degree in child care as well as a natural affinity for little kids makes me more than suitable for this post. In my previous job, I cared for a pair of bubbly identical twins as a live in governess who travelled with the family on a cruise ship for three months. Please feel free to ask me for their numbers or email if you require a reference. Although I have never visited Australia, my research assures me that there is a lot to see and do in this fantastic country. While staying and working with the family, I would like to explore the museums, zoos, and maybe even an animal sanctuary if time permits. I hope you will consider my application favorably and look forward to a positive reply. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, Shachi
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am applying for the post of Nanny in reference to your advertisement in
this months
' issue of the Australia Cosmopolitan magazine. Your advertisement mentioned a requirement to care for a six-year-
old
while living with the family for six months, which I would be most happy to fulfil.

I have always felt that looking after young ones is not
only
rewarding
but
also
pleasing. Caring for a
little
one while
also
getting paid sounds like a dream
come
true.

My bachelors' degree in child care
as well
as a natural affinity for
little
kids
makes
me more than suitable for this post. In my previous job, I cared for a pair of bubbly identical twins as a
live
in governess who travelled with the family on a cruise ship for three months.
Please
feel free to ask me for their numbers or email if you require a reference.

Although I have never visited Australia, my research assures me that there is a lot to
see
and do in this fantastic country. While staying and working with the family, I would like to explore the museums, zoos, and maybe even an animal sanctuary if time permits.

I hope you will consider my application
favorably
and look forward to a
positive
reply.

Thanking you,

Yours
faithfully
,

Shachi
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in an autralian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. write a letter to the parents explaining why you would like the job, and be suitable person to employ.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
218 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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