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Write an application letter for the job which doctor

Write an application letter for the job which doctor OgkN7
Dear Mr Sands, I am writing to apply for the job of doctor which l heard in the radio broadcasting on Monday. This is an ideal job for me given my enthusiasm, qualifications and experience. I have had a significant number of operation and majority of my patients was survived. Furthermore, l took BTEC Diplona in Urjuzaa clinic in 2015 for operating 15 people. l studied 3 years in Med college and 7 years in Tashmiy University. I was rewarded with Silver medal for l was more skillful at medicine than other students here. Moreover, l worked in a great number of hospitals clearly, l employed in Experienced Doctors in 2 years, however, l had to fire because my family and me leaved to Fergana from Tashkend. Additionally, l worked in Fergana in 1 year, then l got a leisure out of the wee, therefore l deserted. You can see from my CV my extra qualifications and skills. In this job wee, distant and other opportunities there, thus l have chosen this work and l think you find me to fit to this job. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Mamuravo Nigina
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of doctor which l heard in the radio broadcasting on Monday. This is an ideal
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my enthusiasm, qualifications and experience. I have had a significant number of operation and
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my family and me leaved to
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Fergana
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, then l
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l deserted. You can
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from my CV my extra qualifications and
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skills
. In this
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wee, distant and other opportunities there,
thus
l have chosen this work and l
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think
you find me to fit to this
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. I look forward to hearing from you as
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Nigina
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IELTS letter Write an application letter for the job which doctor

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  American English
1 paragraphs
198 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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