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Write about your school in an abroad country and your local and ask help from your professor whether which one you should chose

Write about your school in an abroad country and your local and ask help from your professor whether which one you should chose eAqyG
Dear Ms Asiya I am writing to ask if you could help me taking a lucrative way on my issue. The thing that took me in dilemma is where to go my post secondary education. Should I choose studing in my hometown or go to the abroad. First and foremost thing is that if I chose to study in my local I would be close to home and my familiars. In as much as having any rent and other costs, live would be cheaper Moreover, I go to overseas that would mean that it would cost much more money. Further more I feel cultureshock and homesickness On the other hand studing English speaking country would give a chance being an English atmosphere which is very valuable for my later future. As it plays a huge role in my caree I do appreciate your advice as I consider that you are professional educated and adorable teacher. I am looking forward your priceless advice from you Your faithfully Iroda Isroilova
Dear Ms
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Asiya


I am writing to ask if you could
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help
me
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taking
a lucrative way on my issue. The thing that took me in dilemma is where to go my post secondary education. Should I choose
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studing
in my hometown or go to the abroad.

First
and foremost thing is that if I chose to study in my local I would be close to home and my familiars. In as much as having any rent and other costs,
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live
would be
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cheaper


Moreover
, I
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go to overseas
that would mean that it would cost much more money.
Further
more I feel
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cultureshock
and
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homesickness


On the other hand
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studing
Did you mean the adjective "English-speaking"?
English speaking
country would give a chance being an English atmosphere which is
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very
valuable for my later future.

As it plays a huge role in my
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caree
I do appreciate your advice as I consider that you are professional educated and adorable teacher. I am looking forward your priceless advice from
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you


Your
faithfully


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Iroda
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Isroilova
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IELTS letter Write about your school in an abroad country and your local and ask help from your professor whether which one you should chose

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  American English
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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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