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To thank Mrs.Anna for about lessons me

To thank Mrs. Anna for about lessons me QRA8x
Dear Anna, Thanks for your letter. I am working very hard at school at the moment too because I also have my exams at the end of the year. I am going to take eight exams in all subjects, including English. The teachers are giving us a lot of homework and it is hard to do all of it, so I am not going out very much. After the exams, I am going to get a job for the summer. I would like to have a holiday but I can not afford to. I am going to earn some money for my visiting Tashkent. I will go to my London. I hoe you are well and not working hard. Write to me about your lessons
Dear Anna, Thanks for your letter. I am working
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at school at the moment too
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have my exams at the
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of the year. I am going to take eight exams in all subjects, including English. The teachers are giving us
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a lot of
homework and it is
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to do all of it,
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I am not going out
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much. After the exams, I am going to
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get
a job for the summer. I would like to have a holiday
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I can not afford to. I am going to earn
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money for my visiting Tashkent.
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will go to my London.
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hoe you are well and not working
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. Write to me about your
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IELTS letter To thank Mrs. Anna for about lessons me

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
124 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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