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To thank Mrs.Aziza for me letter

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Dear Aziza, Thank you for the letter. It was great to her from you again after such a long time. I really should have written sooner. I have been busy with my exams. I think you should take the invitation Tashkent city in Tashkent are so beautiful. Your life is boring if you never take risks. Extreme sports give you a change to live a full life. Last summer I tried rock climbing and really enjoyed it. It is great that Madina is coming at Last! Anyway, I must go and get on with my work! Hope to hear from your soon. All the best, Marjona
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Aziza
, Thank you for the letter. It was great to her from you again after such a long time. I
really
should have written sooner. I have been busy with my exams.
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I
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you should take the invitation Tashkent city in Tashkent are
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so
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beautiful
. Your life is boring if you never take
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risks
. Extreme sports give you a
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change
to
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live
a full life. Last summer I tried rock climbing and
really
enjoyed it. It is great that
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Madina
is coming at Last! Anyway, I
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must
go and
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get
on with my work! Hope to hear from
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your
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soon
. All the best,
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Marjona

IELTS letter To thank Mrs.Aziza for me letter

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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