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To thank Mrs.Mahliyo for find my passport

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Dear Madam I am writting this letter to extend my sincere thanks to Mahliyo, the teacher of your school. I am a commuter and every day I went to university. Last Monday morning when luck down on the way passport. When I arrived home, I remembered my passport. But I didn't find my passport. Ms. Mahliyo brought my passport yesterday. I was very much grateful to Ms. Mahliyo her kindness. Please forward my heartfelt thank fulness to her. I feel very much pround of your school for having such a good employee. I do hope that your school would reward Ms. Mahliyo for her noble deeds. Sincerely Charos
Dear Madam

I am
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writting
this letter to extend my sincere thanks to
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Mahliyo
, the teacher of your school.

I am a commuter and every day I went to university. Last Monday morning when luck down on the way
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passport
. When I arrived home, I remembered my
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passport
.
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But
I didn't find my
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passport
. Ms.
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Mahliyo
brought my
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passport
yesterday. I was
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very
much grateful to Ms.
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Mahliyo
her kindness.
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Please
forward my heartfelt thank
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fulness
to her. I feel
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very
much
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pround
of your school for having such a
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good
employee. I do hope that your school would reward Ms.
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Mahliyo
for her noble deeds.

Sincerely
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Charos
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IELTS letter To thank Mrs. Mahliyo for find my passport

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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