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asking for advice about college and its assessmen

asking for advice about college and its assessmen kWywn
Dear Ann I am writing you in order to ask your advice on my future education. I think it would be more better if I ask you about lifestyleof your current living city. Saying honestly, I registered in online platform which is avialable in Canada. And that platform is based on educating at CAMP college where near to you and that you have graduated one. It would be of great help if you could explain the CAMP educational system and give me your best advice in order to choose correct option. I look forward your replying. Please, direct me to the right option and help to comprehend speciality of CAMP. Yours sincerelyOptimist Lady
Dear Ann I am writing you in order to ask your advice on my future education. I
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on educating at CAMP college where near to you and that you have graduated one. It would be of great
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if you could
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explain
the CAMP educational system and give me your best advice in order to choose correct option. I look forward
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your
replying.
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, direct me to the right option and
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help
to comprehend
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speciality
of CAMP. Yours
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sincerelyOptimist
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IELTS letter asking for advice about college and its assessmen

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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