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Dear Hannah, How are you? Thanks for your last letter. Today I want to tell you about my last summer holiday. I spent my summer holiday with my family in Da Nang for three days. On the first day, we had a trip to Ba Na Hills. The atmosphere was very fresh, it made me feel good. On the second day, we went swimming in the afternoon. Da Nang beach is very pure and the scene is really beautiful. So I took many nice pictures. And on the last day, we just walked around the town, enjoys some delicious dishes of Da Nang such as Bun Quang, rice paper with pork, etc, and bought some souvenirs. I had a great time with my family. Da Nang is a wonderful place and the people here are friendly. How was your summer holiday? I look forward to hearing from you. Best wished, Trang.
Dear Hannah,

How are you? Thanks for your last letter.
Today
I want to
tell
you about my last summer holiday.

I spent my summer holiday with my family in
Da
Nang
for three days. On the
first
day, we had a trip to Ba Na Hills. The atmosphere was
very
fresh, it made me feel
good
. On the second day, we went swimming in the afternoon.
Da
Nang
beach is
very
pure and the scene is
really
beautiful
.
So
I took
many
nice pictures.

And on the last day, we
just
walked around the town, enjoys
some
delicious dishes of
Da
Nang
such as Bun
Quang
, rice paper with pork, etc, and
bought
some
souvenirs.

I had a great time with my family.
Da
Nang
is a wonderful place and the
people
here are friendly.

How was your summer holiday? I look forward to hearing from you.

Best wished,

Trang
.
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IELTS letter write about your last vacation from 120-150 word

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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