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academic history what are the advantage and disadvantage

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. I have already completed hotel management certificate course after my ordinary levels in 2002 to 2003, therefore my aim was to complete higher education so I resign form my work and started to gather necessary academic qualification. The first step was to have secondary school certificate because some foreign collage is required it even I have certificate cause soon after my O/L. I was determined to completed it and I was successfully pass my exam with art stem. Even though I wanted do my A/L with hospitality and tourism related subjects this exam doesn’t have hospitality and tourism related subjects so I have no potions than selecting the subject which is available in the exam. The next step was to improve my academic English since I was going to study in English in Singapore I had to have 5. 5 in IELTS. I did 6 moths englisg course n British Council sir lank from January to June in 2015. following that I also did some IELTS preparation courses as well and I did my IELTS exam in February 2016. Once I done with necessary exams I got an offer for diploma in hospitality and tourism management from London school of business and finance in Singapore diploma course in hospitality management in Singapore and that was 2016 April I flew to Singapore

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