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WRITE ABOUT A PLACE WHERE YOU ARE LIVING.

WRITE ABOUT A PLACE WHERE YOU ARE LIVING. jVN7a
I was born and grown up on the poor land in Gia Loc district, Hai Duong province in the nouthwestern part of Viet Nam, far for Ha Noi about 60 km. That’s where deeply attaches to me 10 years of life. If anyone who asks me that “ What’s the thing your most prouf of? . I will answer that’s my hometown. Gia Loc is land poor where the people live by rice cultivation, breeding and fishing. Although the life is very difficult, but the people is very happily and friendly. You can come here by mottorbike, car, taxi if you stay in the nouthwestern. If you come to Gia Loc, you will feel many interesting things. You can visiting Le Thanh Nghi Memorial house, Cuoi Pagoda, Quat Pagoda. If you come here in march every year, you can embark Cuoi Pagoda festival. In here you can play folk game such as: Keo co, O an quan, chinese chess, water puppet…. I love my hometown very much because it is not only I was born but also where deeply attaches to me 10 years of life. It has left me with many beautiful memories and it will according to me for the rest of my life
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was born
and grown up on the poor land in
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Gia
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Loc
district,
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Hai
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Duong
province in the
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nouthwestern
part of
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Viet
Nam, far for Ha
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Noi
about 60 km. That’s where
deeply
attaches to me 10 years of
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life
. If anyone who asks me that
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“
What’s the thing your most
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prouf
of?
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.
I will answer that’s my hometown.
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Gia
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Loc
is land poor where the
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people
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by rice cultivation, breeding and fishing. Although the
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difficult,
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the
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happily
and friendly.

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here by
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mottorbike
, car, taxi if you stay in the
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nouthwestern
. If you
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to
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Gia
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Loc
, you will feel
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interesting things. You can
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visiting
Le Thanh
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Nghi
Memorial
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house
,
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Cuoi
Pagoda,
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Pagoda. If you
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come
here in
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march
every year, you can embark
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Cuoi
Pagoda festival. In here you can play folk game such as:
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Keo
co, O
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an
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quan
,
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chinese
chess, water puppet….

I
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love
my hometown
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much
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I
was born
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also
where
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attaches to me 10 years of
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life
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left
me with
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many
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beautiful
memories and it will according to me for the rest of my
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life
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IELTS letter WRITE ABOUT A PLACE WHERE YOU ARE LIVING.

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