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You recently had to go to Australia for a holiday. However, you could not go your address. Because, the flight was delayed by a day. Write a letter to the airline company.

You recently had to go to Australia for a holiday. However, you could not go your address. Because, the flight was delayed by a day. Write a letter to the airline company. wOolr
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regard to unexpected delay in a flight. Although, I was initially booked a ticket for to leave London of Britain on the 13th of September and return on the 23th of October. Thus far, I arrived to the airport of London with my employers as well as, one of your staff told us " the plane was defered by a day". At that time I was so angry that we would go to the holiday. Given the fact that, it was incredibly significant to us. This caused considerable inconvenience, not only myself but also my workers as I was due to commence work again the following day. By the way, I will ask you that you release my all requirements. Yours Faithfully, John Smith
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regard to unexpected delay in a flight. Although, I was
initially
booked a ticket for to
leave
London of Britain on the 13th of September and return on the
23th
of October.
Thus
far, I arrived to the airport of London with my employers
as well
as, one of your staff
told
us
"
the
plane
was
defered
by a day
"
. At that time I was
so
angry that we would go to the holiday.
Given
the fact that, it was
incredibly
significant to us. This caused considerable inconvenience, not
only
myself
but
also
my workers as I was due to commence work again the following day. By the way, I will ask you that you release my all requirements. Yours
Faithfully
, John
Smith
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IELTS letter You recently had to go to Australia for a holiday. However, you could not go your address. Because, the flight was delayed by a day. Write a letter to the airline company.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
133 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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